The lonely Boy sat there in this room
the only sound was the darkness whine
as he sat he sat in gloom
letting the day pass by like time
he sat there not making a motion
the clock on the wall just tick tick
he sat there like the titan at the bottom of the ocean
he imagine he was the titanic he got sick
1 comment:
You've got the rhyme scheme down, but you missed the personification. If you had the clock say or do something resembling a human trait, that would have personified it.
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